Week 2 - 16th October 2012


Finally I've got the password working.

Last week's text type exercise was a good one.  I didn't get 100% correct.  I should work harder.


This week, our challenging task is to untangle the mixed words given as below, and make two sentences.



I sorted out the words and made these sentences:

A shop in Bankstwon, Western Sydney was fined $12,000 in January, for Salmonella outbreak. 

After consuming the poisoning bakehouse made products including bread and hot food, 83 customers fell sick and 20 ill people hospitalised.

Eventally I found out the original sentences from Marion.  It is written as:

A WESTERN Sydney hot bread shop has been fined $12,000 over a salmonella outbreak that made 83 people sick, including 20 who were hospitalised.

The customers fell ill with food poisoning after consuming products from teh Bankstown Bakehouse in January.

It is a good exercise for sorting out the words and organising the sentences.  I enjoy doing it.